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At first you thought you were dreaming,hallucinating.But no, it was real.And it was happening.

Only after a few seconds did you shut your eyes and let the cold embrace take hold of your  soul.Like you imagined them to be, his lips were icy cold.But in a soft way, like a fresh early autumn breeze.As the kiss ended, your noses were still touching.His cheeks turned light pink and his eye lids remained shut, like he was savoring the moment.

But you didn't want it to end.You had thrown your arms around his neck now, and instinctively he wrapped his own arms tight around your back.Like he feared you would somehow leave.The kiss became more intense and he had you up against the wall.

The spirit of winter...I'm in love with the spirit of winter

In your head that sounded extremely cheesy, but you couldn't care less.

Until the doorbell rang.

You both stopped at the same time and looked at each other.A look of surprise and frustration.

And the bell rings when I'm the middle of something, of course!

You blushed and a small laugh escaped Jack's lips.

"I think you better get that."

You nodded and he let go of you.Oh how you wished he didn't.

You walked towards the front door and opened it cautiously.Standing before you was your best friend (best friend's name).Your mood suddenly lightened up.

"Oh hey (best friend's name)! What's up?" you asked.

"Not much, just that I'm babysitting the brats later during the evening." she frowned.

"Yikes!"

"Yeah, I know.But hey, we were planning on going to the movies and we wanted to know if you wanted to come! (hot guy from school's name) is going to be there." she winked.

"Um...sorry (best friend's name) but my parent's didn't want me going out to places while they were gone.Dumb parent rules." you quickly said.Truth be told, you were actually quite allowed to leave the house.But you didn't want to leave Jack alone.It hurt to lie to your best friend but if you told her about the past couple of days, she would definitely think you're going crazy.She wasn't the type to believe in fairy tales considering her age.

"Oh...well, if you ever change your mind you know were to find us.Er, bye (your name)." she turned and walked away from your house.

She was disappointed, and it showed.But what else could you tell her?

You waved your hand, and closed the door with that feeling inside your guts.That weird and horrible feeling you get when you lie to someone who shouldn't be lied to.Especially when the two of you swore to tell each other everything, at the age of 7.

You shuffled back to the living room, only to find it empty.

"Jack?" you shouted out loud.

You payed attention to every sound.But no response from the silver-haired boy.

You crossed your arms over your chest and sighed.

"Jack, get down here.I know you're above me."

You lifted your head towards the ceiling and saw him stuck to it spiderman style. You raised an eyebrow in his direction.

"Having a hard time playing Hide n' Seek with me?" you laughed as he stood there frozen.

"It seems so." he laughed.

He hovered down and leaned on his staff.

"Who was it?" he asked.

"Hmm? Oh, just a friend.Nothing big." you smiled,trying to assure him everything was fine.

"OK,cool." he looked at the couch and sat on it comfortably.He patted the spot next to him.You smiled and took a seat by his side.You rested your head on his shoulder and closed your eyes.After a few minutes of silence, Jack started humming a song.The song he told you about earlier with the mother and her son.

You smiled to yourself, happy to be here with him.
:w00t: Chapter 8 completed, have a better feeling about the next chapter tho :D

I was a bit in a hurry, so I might of messed this one up a bit,err...I promise to make the next one better!

Chapter 7: link
Chapter 9: link

~Adios
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AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Spider-Man style!Spidey Groovy Dance [V1]
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Adewdewk Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
Spider-Man! Haha!
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:spidey: Gotta love Peter Parker
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MikiPhineas Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I-don't-even-know-anymore....
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mak96k Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, I couldn't help but chuckle at the spiderman style thing!
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I really love Spiderman and I couldn't help but add it :iconeheheplz:
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mak96k Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, me too! He's my fav superhero (even beats the avengers)!
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LONG LIVE SPIDER MAN :iconspidermanplz: AND SPIDERPIG :iconspiderpigplz:
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mak96k Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL! YES!!!!!!!!!
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Schnee-Fee Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Filmographer
When you mentioned the story behind the song, I thought of this one. [link]

I don't know why, but it works.
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...this is so legit omg yes it does work so much! o:
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Schnee-Fee Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Filmographer
Yeah 0___0
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girlfrom-emeraldcity Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it! But here's a tip. After every period, at the start of a new sentance, there must be a space.
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D And yeah, I noticed I forgot to put spaces (lying, I was just getting really lazy lol) But ok, thanks for the tip! (:
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girlfrom-emeraldcity Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome! LAZYNESS FOR THE WIN!!!
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MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dawwwwww! I love this!!!
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you like it :aww:
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Corrynfrost13 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
*faint* * wake up* more please :)
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Maggatha13 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
this is epic
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Happy to hear that my fanfiction is epic ;)
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Maggatha13 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Of course its epic
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PrincessPixieDust Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHY CAN"T SOON BE NOW
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww I wish could write everything in one night too D:
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PrincessPixieDust Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, me too. I luv to write my own stories, but sometimes a chapter takes forever! And that sucks, cause i know how it feels to wait.
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know how you feel :icongrouphugplz:
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YahoolYafool Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so freaking amazing!! i need more. M.O.R.E!!! more more more!!!
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
asdalsflkl thank you soooo much
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YahoolYafool Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :D
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sonja-chan123 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh~what next ??what next???:iconyeashplz:hehe.... against the wall..:iconiggybrowsplz: im liking that!lol. you should have them kiss more!:icondawhatplz: oh~! technically have him kiss me more~!:iconifaintplz: (but only if the kissing doesnt ruin your story cuz its getting real good and i dont want to mess up what you have planned already)
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oooooh believe me, I will make them kiss :iconmegustaplz:
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sonja-chan123 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hehahehahaheahehahehahehah!!!!!!:iconmegustamemeplz:
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LirelusCheshire Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey! This is an amazing fanfiction!!
I really wanna write fanfics too but im having some trouble with making a description and placing a photo with the fanfic. If i may ask, How do you do that?
Thanks in advance ^^
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad to know you like it :D

And for the description and the photo you just have to go in "Submit Art" at the top of your page, when you're there click "Add text" and right below it you'll see this button that allows you to add an image to your fanfiction ^^ Hope that somehow helped
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LirelusCheshire Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks you, and firstly i really apologize for the late reply! So sorry!
So this means that it's not written as a journal entry? The 'Add text' is where the fanfic is written?
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HetaliaOWC Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
M.O.R.E!! PLEASE MORE!!
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course ^_^
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XD AWESOME!
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconawwplz: Thank you!
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LittleDreamer96 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
just..... GREAT!! :D
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha thankss :)
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Blue-Water-Goddess Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
*In love with fan-fiction*
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol XD thanxx
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Bows
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ASDFGHJASDFGHJasdfghjk))
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I can see you're excitement lol
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