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The holidays had just started, the snow had just fallen and everyone was in a pleasant mood. Your parents were just about to leave for their vacation to Italy. But you weren't going with them because they were celebrating their anniversary. So they agreed to leave you in charge of the house while they were gone.

"Don't forget to lock the doors,close the TV and the stove, make sure you close all the lights, no parties and no eating in the living room and..." your mother went on and on about the rules to follow.

"...and especially: No boys over!"

"Alright, mom! I got it, don't worry! I'll be fine."

"Okay, dear. We'll be back in a week. Love you, hun." she said as she kissed your nose.

Your dad waved from the car as he drove down the street. Your mom gestured wildly, like if they were leaving for a year.

"Love you too.." you whispered to yourself as you closed the front door.

They always had this dumb vacation every year, and you never got to go with them. Not even once! But since you were old enough to take care of yourself this year, they didn't call your grandparents to babysit you.

*At least* you thought to yourself.

You shuffled towards the TV and slouched onto the sofa. You surfed the channels for a while, then as you looked out your window, you saw snow falling.

It wasn't the gross type of snow, but the new,white and fluffy kind. You smiled and got up towards the door. As you opened it, a gust of wind blew into your (hair color) hair. You smiled widely and hopped into your boots and grabbed the nearest jacket. You locked the door behind you and walked down your street. As the fluffy snow fell onto your face, you breathed in all of the winter odors nearby such as the pine trees,the burning wood and the smell of cooking turkey. Winter was maybe not your favorite season, but you still liked it a lot because of those things.

You suddenly heard laughter. On your right, kids were making a snowman, throwing snowballs or buildings snow castles. You smiled, remembering the times when you did those things. You suddenly had an urge to join them. They looked liked they were having loads of fun. But then you remembered that you were probably too old for those kind of things, and you continued to walk down the snowy and sinister street.
My first ever JF fanfiction :dummy: Yeah I know the first part sounds sad and gross but believe me it'll lighten up soon enough! :D

Chapter 2 may come out tomorrow during the day, just that my hands are currently killing the life out of me.

Thanks in advance for any faves or comments!

Chapter 2: link
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Zyra01 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
I have to ask how did I have Demetra?? :3 when did read-chan and Jack get it on XD Lolz but anyway really awesome and love it. <3
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
well you see.....when a man and a woman love each other very much...

Zyra01 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
XD Lolz no need to explain it like I'm 13. It was just one of those hey you have a kid all of a sudden moments XD Lolz not that it's a bad thing. :3 I still love it <3
KITTEN-DEMON Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
:D good story but WIERD I love it o.O
BlueKnightcore Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Can I ask if this is a pitch x jack story
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
noope its a jackxreader
InsanitysWidow Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Can't wait to read the rest and catch up!
poppyrous Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
Man, I can really imagine myself in this! Awesome!
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
poppyrous Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
no problem! :D
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