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"How long has she been like this?"

"About a week."

"Is she going to wake up soon?"

"There's no way for us to find out when. She'll wake up when she's ready."


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Feeling your eyes get lighter, you decided to try and open them up. It was difficult at first, but you managed to open them wide enough to see where in the world you were. You noticed that your head was resting on a pillow and tubes were shoved up your nostrils. Wiggling your nose, you let out a small sigh. The lights from the ceiling were still too bright for you to see the room in which you were currently in.

You felt something brush your arm and so you quickly shot your head to the side. It was your best friend, Mei. She smiled brightly at you, tears streaming down her face. You stared at her, shocked and cracked a small smile as well. She enveloped you in her arms and hugged you tight, practically squeezing the air out of your lungs. You buried your face in her dark brown hair and closed your eyes. Why were you crying again?

As she pulled herself away, you were able to distinguish the room in which you were in. It was white. Everything was white. A couple of plastic chairs rested against the wall in the corner of the room, a small rectangular window let the small amount of sun in and a strange man stood at the end of your bed, which was rather uncomfortable by the way.

You looked back at Mei and noticed her lips moving quickly. You stared at them, wondering why they were moving so fast. As the seconds passed without you responding, her smile slowly disappeared and was replaced with a straight line. She looked at the man (whom you recognized, he was a doctor) and her lips started moving again. You looked at him with a confused face and cocked your head to the side. He squinted and walked to the other side of your bed. His lips started moving as well. But no sound came out, just like Mei.

"What's wrong?" You said. Although, you didn't hear yourself.

Struck with a wave of panic, you started to pat your neck. You tried to talk more, but you couldn't hear a thing. You tried talking, whispering, humming and even screaming. Nothing.

Mei looked at you differently and finally covered her mouth with her hands. The doctor looked down and quickly walked out of the room. Your eyes were glued to your hands. Could this be...

Minutes later, you found yourself sobbing in Mei's arms once again. This couldn't be real. A nightmare, it was just a nightmare. Right?

After about 30 minutes, the doctor came back into the room. In his hands was a sheet of paper and a pen. You looked up at him with a disgusted face and buried yourself in Mei's arms. She shook you lightly, encouraging you to look back up at him.  You did as you were told, although you were sure you looked like pure crap right now. Messy and unwashed hair, ugly hospital gown, tears streaming down your face. But the tall man seemed to ignore that.

Instead, he took the sheet of paper along with his pen and started to write something on it. When he was done, he handed it to you.

Mrs. ____________, you were in a short coma for about a week. You were in an accident, do you remember? The night of August 10th you were driving on the road along with Gilbert Beilschmidt, Antonio Carriedo Fernandez, Francis Bonnefoy and Belle Peeters. Your car drifted into the wrong lane and you unfortunately ended up crashing into a larger truck. You were all brought to the hospital after a couple of witnesses saw the crash and called 9-1-1. You've been in the hospital since then. You suffered from a head trauma and a dislocated shoulder, but that was all. Although now you don't seem to hear us, correct? I just finished talking with some of the other doctors and well... You seem to have also lost your sense of hearing during the accident.

You dropped the paper onto the bed sheets, more tears threatening to spill. You started to hyperventilate until Mei calmed you down by gently massaging your back, careful not to touch your injured shoulder. You hiccuped a few times and buried your face into your hands once again, crying your heart out. Even though you couldn't hear your own cries. That is, until realization hit you. You quickly stopped crying and grabbed the pen and paper and started writing something down at a rather fast speed. You handed the paper to the doctor and watched as he read it carefully.

What happened to them?

He pinched his lips together before looking back up at you and hesitantly writing down the 12 words that would probably haunt your life forever.

Gilbert, Francis and Belle died. Antonio is in a coma.

You screamed as loud as you could, shattering everybody's ears but your own.
Please don't hate me since I practically just killed Gil, Belle and Francey-Pants :iconcanadasulkplz:

Here's Chapter 1! God, you have no idea how hard it was to write this :iconlazycryplz:

Link to the Prologue: sherlockedhazza.deviantart.com…
Link to Chapter 2: sherlockedhazza.deviantart.com…

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:iconcelestmorning:
Celestmorning Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
the feels 
Danisnotonfire: FEELS 
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CrazyHetaliaLover13 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My feels are everywhere... thanks a lot. *there is a blood-like substance running down the walls, dripping onto the ground, and surrounding the computer screen*
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shadowiscool123 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No love for Belgium? FRANCE AND PRUSSIA AREN'T THE ONLY ONES WHO DIED!! //sob
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asdfghjkl1d Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
NO!!! NOT PRUSSIA!!! :'( 
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:iconjullekeliseus:
JullekEliseus Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I would hate you, but you said please so... *deep breath* I don't hate you.
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rockandmetal101 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
*curls up, crying* FrancyPants... Zhe Awesome Gilbert... Why did you die.? ;_;
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SometimesIFeelDown Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BELGIUM DIED
OH GOD WHY
WHY DID MY COUNTRY HAVE TO DIE//feels all over the place omfg
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:iconkathybrine:
KathyBrine Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*pats back* It's okay...here, have a box of cookies.

*hands a box of cookies for you*
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:iconnyoalice:
Nyoalice Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
MY COUNTRY AND THE AWESOMENESS IS DEAD !!

NOOOOOOO ! MY COUNTRY CAN'T LIVE ;___________; AND PRUSSIA IS NOT HERE !
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
WHATS UR COUNTRY
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:iconnyoalice:
Nyoalice Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
I'm from France :I (<-- She don't like France )
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh bon! Donc vous parlez sûrement le français, oui? Puis pourquoi n'aimez-vous pas la France?
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Nyoalice Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Oui, je parle le français ( c'est ma langue natal owo ) ~
Je ne sais pas vraiment *mind : *facepalm**, la France n'est pas vraiment un pays " SUPER AWESOME " comme Prusse ~
Mais comme je parlais du personnage, je veux dire que France ( ou Francis, lulz ), je ne l'aime pas. Sûrement pour sa chanson "Hattafude Parade", vous entendez des bruits de baisers en fond. Et puis je ne l'ai jamais vraiment aimé ( comme Japon et Allemagne, mais j'aime le Japon (pays) D: ) ~

Sorry if you can't understand my french...
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course I can understand (: I'm from Quebec so I understood everything perfectly lol and yeah France (hetalia) gets on my nerves too sometimes... I mostly love Spain and Romano -3-
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Nyoalice Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Spain is my 2nd favorite character, and Romano 8rd ~
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DragonsLuna Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
... They are not dead if you keep your memories of them in your heart. Those three will always be loved. We all shall remember them. (Wow. Wise words from me, I'm surprised with myself.)
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wise words indeed *bows to you*
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DragonsLuna Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*bows back* Arigato. My country (Elipsia (the same island that the Axis and the Allies fought on)) shall live on with those words!
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SpikeyMacksy Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
NON! NEIN! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
i sorta imagined the blood and such
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XxMaximumRide14xX Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
OMG NO NOT FRANCEY PANTS. WHY!!!! Love this by the way o3o
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
FRANCEY NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :iconwhyyyplz: btw thank you! xo
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XxMaximumRide14xX Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh no problem!! YOUR WORK IS AMAZING.
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:iconhetagirl143:
Hetagirl143 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
Oh..........my............goooooooooooooooood!!! *sobs*
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icontherethereplz:
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:iconhetagirl143:
Hetagirl143 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
;w; This story is adorable so far and I can't wait for more. And also the reason mostly why I'm sobbing is because I'm a prussia fangirl like nobody's business,and when I saw that he had died in the car crash I just couldn't take the feels!!
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Forgive me, Hetagirl-san...
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:iconhetagirl143:
Hetagirl143 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
It's alright...*huggles*
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Marilsasda Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Writer
:iconsoemotionalplz: No no no no :iconcraiyuiplz: 
Good job Sherlock-chan, I totally did not expect that, It was very surprising. :iconyuicraiplz:
I salute you :iconsaluteplz:
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Captain! :iconsaluteplz:
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:iconfabulouscthulhu:
FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Professional General Artist
'M CRYING WHY YOU KILL THEM.
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OMG NO DONT CRY IM SORRY HUN
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:iconlacy700:
Lacy700 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. What do you know, the two who said something about Gilbert's driving survived!
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:icongiantstorylover:
giantstorylover Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
NO!!!!! WHY'D THEY HAVE TO DIE?! *sobs*
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
IM SORRY OKAY D:
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:icongiantstorylover:
giantstorylover Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
it's okay. I was being dramatic. 

I like the story

I also like your icon
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol I know, so was i :XD: thanks btw!
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:icongiantstorylover:
giantstorylover Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
no problem

where can i find your icon? It's adorable!
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I went on Photobucket and simply typed in "China Hetalia" a dozen of icons like this one showed up in the following pages :D
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giantstorylover Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
cool! Thank you ^v^
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MochiIslandNationII Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
nuuuuu!!! Sad fayse.  i'll forever remember the awesome prussia (and france)!!!!!!!NOOO don't leave :C 
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconlazycryplz:
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kiki951 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Me: :iconcryforeverplz: Why!!
Mom: Well that what happen if you drive stuck and don't put a seatbelt on.
Me: :iconpokerfacememeplz: Mom, your heartless
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:iconsherlockedhazza:
SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omg kiki951's mom omg just why
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:iconkiki951:
kiki951 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Pretty much my mom likes to stated the facts. Just the facts.
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:iconcountryoreo:
CountryOreo Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
imam bout to cry like reader-chan!
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:iconalliecyanne:
AllieCyanne Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
Prussia and France Dead?! IM OUT
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InsanitysWidow Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the story and your skills. Good, yet sad and keeping me on my toes for more! Can't wait!
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Blossemfall Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
WHY YOU KILL THEM?!?!?!?!? Just don't let Toni die. He is my favorite of the group.
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Toni is safe, no worries
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